Below are Jean's edits to Draft Three. I fixed them and then re-read the whole document making minor edits and formatting changes.
Because of the extensive changes, I’m not sure whether you still mention these texts. I’d like you to keep them in somewhere since this was basically your lit review.Was it published only in this newspaper, or was the article more widely distributed? (I’m trying to gauge whether this one article might have had much impact. – if not, leave it out)Unique means the onlyone of its kind, so you’re either unique or not. Unique can’t be modified by especially.At this point I think you’ve mentioned the resource multiple times and it’s becoming redundant. What part of this section is new? Keep that and deleate the redundancies.
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